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Could you tell Ferncloud i love her?
:EDIT3: I have redrawn this picture if you'd all like to see a fresher version! Thanks again everyone who enjoys this picture <3 your comments and feedback mean a lot to me! Thank you so much guys <333</span>
:EDIT: 400 favs? 3000 views? :'D i love you guys!
:EDIT2: fixed the typo in the picture xD
:SPOILER ALERT: This was by far one of the saddest parts in the warriors series T^T Dustpelt and Ferncloud were one of the original and most perfect couples ever and when Dustpelt asked Firestar to tell her that i almost died cause he was so sad D:> he was like Graystripe when Silverstream died :c SO MANY SAD COUPLES DX
uhg i hate Backgrounds >.> im doin Spottedleaf's death #2 next :C
please give me feedback through a critique it would help me alot!
other warrior cat scenes:
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art (c)
Characters (c) Erin Hunter
:EDIT3: I have redrawn this picture if you'd all like to see a fresher version! Thanks again everyone who enjoys this picture <3 your comments and feedback mean a lot to me! Thank you so much guys <333</span>
:EDIT: 400 favs? 3000 views? :'D i love you guys!
:EDIT2: fixed the typo in the picture xD
:SPOILER ALERT: This was by far one of the saddest parts in the warriors series T^T Dustpelt and Ferncloud were one of the original and most perfect couples ever and when Dustpelt asked Firestar to tell her that i almost died cause he was so sad D:> he was like Graystripe when Silverstream died :c SO MANY SAD COUPLES DX
uhg i hate Backgrounds >.> im doin Spottedleaf's death #2 next :C
please give me feedback through a critique it would help me alot!
other warrior cat scenes:
:thumb340404968:
art (c)
Characters (c) Erin Hunter
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Okay so this looked great but the tears need a little work same with the scratches and the background. I think there were more cats in the background when this happened. Mast likely crying. But let's talk about the tears. They really should not be coming out of the front of his eyes. And the cuts need more depth. They look like cuts but not deep ones. And he would definitely have some really deep cuts after facing the dark forest unless he's a super hero or something. He needs more blood coming out of them too. That is not enough blood coming from someone who just faced the dark forest. But besides that it's great and nice job.