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When you see her.. by PenguinEatsCarrots When you see her.. by PenguinEatsCarrots
Could you tell Ferncloud i love her?

:EDIT: 400 favs? 3000 views? :'D i love you guys!
:EDIT2: fixed the typo in the picture xD

This was by far one of the saddest parts in the warriors series T^T Dustpelt and Ferncloud were one of the original and most perfect couples ever :iconcryforever: and when Dustpelt asked Firestar to tell her that i almost died cause he was so sad D:> he was like Graystripe when Silverstream died :c SO MANY SAD COUPLES DX
uhg i hate Backgrounds >.> im doin Spottedleaf's death #2 next :C
please give me feedback through a critique :D it would help me alot!
other warrior cat scenes:

art (c) :iconpenguineatscarrots:
Characters (c) Erin Hunter
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Wonderful job!
Dustpelt's expression is perfect, but the only think I would change about him would be the cuts. While they do look realistic, they are lacking a certain... intensity. I suggest making them look deeper and going into more detail with the blood. The tears, on the other hand, are absolutely fantastic. I love how some of the drops are fall off of his chin, making it look even more real.
Firestar looks wonderful. I really like how you added the stars around him. What I also noticed was the way you made his outline white. That really made him pop out and appear to be glowing.
Once again, amazing job, keep up the good work! :D
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I really love this! The starry white specks surrounding Firestar is great, its like he's already in StarClan! And it makes my heart ache reading the caption... *sniff sniff* The only thing I would change about this would be Dustpelt's tears. They look almost like syrup, the way they drip down in front of his eyes. :l But other than that, I love this! One of my favs!
I also really like the way starlight is clinging to Firestar's fur and whiskers. His position and shading is awesome too, far better than anything I can/will be able to do! Awesome!
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pepperkit Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Professional Artist
You got something miss spelt it says lover her not love her
Charchar10098 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
Neko Emoji-31 (Crying) [V2] 
My. . . My poor heart :heart: Love this series to death :heart: 
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you~!
Ah yes :'D it was sad but great series
speckledfinch Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I loved this part
WolfBreakDown Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The feels 💔
Zephy10 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
RuggedCatCast Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
So sad
Cry Cry Cry
2 much tears
I mad u a sweater out uf mai tears
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why thank you for the lovely sweater
it matches the scarf I made of my own tears
RuggedCatCast Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm sorry, but I had to...It was such beautiful art and such sadness...I love it...I'm gonna go cry now...
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