:EDIT: 400 favs? 3000 views? :'D i love you guys! :EDIT2: fixed the typo in the picture xD
:SPOILER ALERT: This was by far one of the saddest parts in the warriors series T^T Dustpelt and Ferncloud were one of the original and most perfect couples ever and when Dustpelt asked Firestar to tell her that i almost died cause he was so sad D:> he was like Graystripe when Silverstream died :c SO MANY SAD COUPLES DX uhg i hate Backgrounds >.> im doin Spottedleaf's death #2 next :C please give me feedback through a critique it would help me alot! other warrior cat scenes:
Wonderful job! ------------- Dustpelt's expression is perfect, but the only think I would change about him would be the cuts. While they do look realistic, they are lacking a certain... intensity. I suggest making them look deeper and going into more detail with the blood. The tears, on the other hand, are absolutely fantastic. I love how some of the drops are fall off of his chin, making it look even more real. ------------- Firestar looks wonderful. I really like how you added the stars around him. What I also noticed was the way you made his outline white. That really made him pop out and appear to be glowing. ------------- Once again, amazing job, keep up the good work!
I really love this! The starry white specks surrounding Firestar is great, its like he's already in StarClan! And it makes my heart ache reading the caption... *sniff sniff* The only thing I would change about this would be Dustpelt's tears. They look almost like syrup, the way they drip down in front of his eyes. :l But other than that, I love this! One of my favs! I also really like the way starlight is clinging to Firestar's fur and whiskers. His position and shading is awesome too, far better than anything I can/will be able to do! Awesome!
I cried for like 2 days when Hollyleaf, Firestar, Ferncloud and Spottedleaf all died in the same book. I threw the book acroos the room at this point because I agree, they were amazing together as a couple. I hate how this beautiful cat died. She did it for a good reason, I started disliking Erin Hunter when she killed all of them, especially when Spottedleaf disappeared for, like forever. I lost it when I read when Firestar died.
I DIDN'T GET TO THIS PART I ONLY GOT DONE SIGN OF THE MOON!!! Why does Ferncloud have to die!!! I LOVED HER!!!!!!!!!!! I mean, I knew Firestar dies, but, I don't like him a whole lot sorry firestar fans