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Submitted: July 5, 2012
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When you see her..by *PenguinEatsCarrots

Digital Art / Drawings / Animals

Could you tell Ferncloud i love her?

:EDIT: 400 favs? 3000 views? :'D i love you guys!
:EDIT2: fixed the typo in the picture xD

:SPOILER ALERT: This was by far one of the saddest parts in the warriors series T^T Dustpelt and Ferncloud were one of the original and most perfect couples ever

and when Dustpelt asked Firestar to tell her that i almost died cause he was so sad D:> he was like Graystripe when Silverstream died :c SO MANY SAD COUPLES DX
uhg i hate Backgrounds >.> im doin Spottedleaf's death #2 next :C
please give me feedback through a critique it would help me alot!
other warrior cat scenes:

art (c)

Characters (c) Erin Hunter

Critique by ~sheonapurple Jan 19, 2013, 7:24:06 PM

This my first critique, so...bare with me.

First of all, sorry to critique a year old deviation. I'm sure you've improved since then.

First: the good parts. I adore Dustpelt's anatomy and design, and the shading is good as well. I think the tears are a nice touch.

Now, the parts that could use improvement. The drawing overall is a bit hard to see, hence why the vision is three stars. The background is lacking a bit in detail, but it doesn't draw the attention away from the characters. And finally, the blood could use more detail.

Overall, I think you did very good on this picture. The details are nice, but some improvements are needed here and there. Well, I hope this critique is useful and helps in the future

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Critique by !Beautifulsilverhawk Dec 30, 2012, 3:01:20 PM

OMg i actually cried when i read this part of the book it is very moving and you seem to catch sad scenes well and that is a very hard thing to do.
I finished this book two days after it came out.
I think the originality isn't much because the characters aren't yours but anyone who draws the original warrior cats aren't completely original but i love the stars on firestars fur and the tears in dust pelts eyes the scratches were effective and you chose dust pelts colours well

overall i loved it and am a big fan of your warrior cat drawings

Thanx