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When you see her.. by PenguinEatsCarrots When you see her.. by PenguinEatsCarrots
Could you tell Ferncloud i love her?

:EDIT3: When you see her redrawn by PenguinEatsCarrots  I have redrawn this picture if you'd all like to see a fresher version! Thanks again everyone who enjoys this picture <3 your comments and feedback mean a lot to me! Thank you so much guys <333</span>

:EDIT: 400 favs? 3000 views? :'D i love you guys!
:EDIT2: fixed the typo in the picture xD

:SPOILER ALERT:
This was by far one of the saddest parts in the warriors series T^T Dustpelt and Ferncloud were one of the original and most perfect couples ever :iconcryforever: and when Dustpelt asked Firestar to tell her that i almost died cause he was so sad D:> he was like Graystripe when Silverstream died :c SO MANY SAD COUPLES DX
uhg i hate Backgrounds >.> im doin Spottedleaf's death #2 next :C
please give me feedback through a critique :D it would help me alot!
other warrior cat scenes:
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art (c) :iconpenguineatscarrots:
Characters (c) Erin Hunter
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:iconneshjoe:
Wonderful job!
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Dustpelt's expression is perfect, but the only think I would change about him would be the cuts. While they do look realistic, they are lacking a certain... intensity. I suggest making them look deeper and going into more detail with the blood. The tears, on the other hand, are absolutely fantastic. I love how some of the drops are fall off of his chin, making it look even more real.
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Firestar looks wonderful. I really like how you added the stars around him. What I also noticed was the way you made his outline white. That really made him pop out and appear to be glowing.
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Once again, amazing job, keep up the good work! :D
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I really love this! The starry white specks surrounding Firestar is great, its like he's already in StarClan! And it makes my heart ache reading the caption... *sniff sniff* The only thing I would change about this would be Dustpelt's tears. They look almost like syrup, the way they drip down in front of his eyes. :l But other than that, I love this! One of my favs!
I also really like the way starlight is clinging to Firestar's fur and whiskers. His position and shading is awesome too, far better than anything I can/will be able to do! Awesome!
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XxNorthernWolfxX Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015
I cried when I read this scene
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:iconpepperkit:
pepperkit Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
You got something miss spelt it says lover her not love her
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:iconcharchar10098:
Charchar10098 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
Neko Emoji-31 (Crying) [V2] 
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:iconbellatrixlestrange94:
My. . . My poor heart :heart: Love this series to death :heart: 
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you~!
Ah yes :'D it was sad but great series
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:iconspeckledfinch:
speckledfinch Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I loved this part
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:iconwolfbreakdown:
WolfBreakDown Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The feels 💔
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:iconzephy10:
Zephy10 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
wow!!
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:iconruggedcatcast:
RuggedCatCast Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow
So sad
Cry Cry Cry
2 much tears
I mad u a sweater out uf mai tears
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why thank you for the lovely sweater
it matches the scarf I made of my own tears
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:iconruggedcatcast:
RuggedCatCast Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm sorry, but I had to...It was such beautiful art and such sadness...I love it...I'm gonna go cry now...
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:iconthe-elvenqueen:
The-Elvenqueen Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I bawled when I read that line ;w;. You captured his emotions perfectly uwu
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks you :>
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Ashenstorm Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
I cried for like 2 days when Hollyleaf, Firestar, Ferncloud and Spottedleaf all died in the same book. I threw the book acroos the room at this point because I agree, they were amazing together as a couple. I hate how this beautiful cat died. She did it for a good reason, I started disliking Erin Hunter when she killed all of them, especially when Spottedleaf disappeared for, like forever. I lost it when I read when Firestar died.
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HawkyFrost Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my, this is really sad... Dustpelt and Ferncloud are such a cute couple.. </3
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
they were : (
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:iconmangojango16:
Mangojango16 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
At first I thought Dustpelt was Brambleclaw, and I was like, 'Wait.. Wut.' XD 
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha they kinda look a like dont they?
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:iconmangojango16:
Mangojango16 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. xD 
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ecomist Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
Am I the only one that was happy when firestar died...but yeah I loved fern cloud it was sad when she died but at least she gets to see larchkit, holykit, and..shrewpaw?, also the rest of her family
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Hawkfrost22501 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THE FEELS. THEY'RE FEELSY.
;u; I finished the book like an hour ago. My face when he died was like: ;m;
FIRESTAR. TELL FIRESTAR IN STARCLAN THAT I LOVE HIM. ;A; -cries on a random shoulder-  t QAQ t WHYYYYY.
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:iconcracklingsun:
Cracklingsun Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013

MY FEELS WERE PUNCHED

 

FIRESTAR AND FERNCLOUD WERE MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS

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:iconleafstormy:
Leafstormy Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Mine too ; n ; Whyyyyyyyyyyyyy why should they have to die - n -
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:iconcracklingsun:
Cracklingsun Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
IDDKKKKK.

D:
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:iconleafstormy:
Leafstormy Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeah D: That's sad
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SwedTheDemon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG for a second I was all like "Wait.... Brambleclaw loved Ferncloud?!?!" Then I was like "Wait... FERNCLOUD FRIGGING DIES?!?!?!?!?!"
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animechick344034 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
DUSTPELT AND FERNCLOUD HAVE BEEN TOGETHER forever
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ikr ; - ;
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:iconxxsandyclawxx:
xxSandyclawxx Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist
omg p-p i want to cry D:>
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i' sorry D: heres a tissue! :icontissueplz:
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xxSandyclawxx Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist
thanks p-p
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nno3060 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IS FIRESTAR DEATH!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconxxsandyclawxx:
xxSandyclawxx Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist
firestar died in the last hope :DDD
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:iconnno3060:
nno3060 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nooooooooo!!!! ;(
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SparrowsNskittlez Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
MY FEELS :'C </3
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im sorry ; - ;
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:iconsparrowsnskittlez:
SparrowsNskittlez Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
It's ok ;-;
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:iconheckcats123:
heckcats123 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I remember this part!
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:iconwolfraingirlhunter:
wolfraingirlhunter Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
who is the starclan warrior that is in front of Dustpelt
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Firestar
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:iconwolfraingirlhunter:
wolfraingirlhunter Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
oh yeah Firestar dead at the of last hope
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alpy19 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
sooooooooooooooooooooo (with an infinity of os sad) :(
Great job though
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ^^
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Fb-PHE13 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz: That was so sad! ;-;
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It really was ; - ;
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Fb-PHE13 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
;-;
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icantdoanything1 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
cool
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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DreamingJay34 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I DIDN'T GET TO THIS PART I ONLY GOT DONE SIGN OF THE MOON!!! Why does Ferncloud have to die!!! I LOVED HER!!!!!!!!!!! I mean, I knew Firestar dies, but, I don't like him a whole lot :( sorry firestar fans
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PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wrote Spoilers in the description D:
It was very sad :c
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