"You promised you'd be there to welcome me!" "I'm sorry...that was never going to happen, my love."
:SPOILER ALERT: so heres the scene where Spottedleaf dies for a 2nd time.. wich must really suck.. this was another depresing scene that happened in the last hope wich i swear was the most depressing of all her books! please give me feedback through a critique it would help me alot! i'm not puting the mature filter on because of the blood.. but if i get comments about it ill put it on
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I gave this full stars because I am a huge fan of Warriors. I love Spottedleaf and Firestar (though I think hes still better with Sandstorm) The lack of detail in the background really makes the cats stand out. You can really catch the feeling of grief with the tears and all the blood. The scene is extremely sad, you have really managed to catch their expressions, this made my cry for a very long time...
You could maybe do Sandstorm when Firestar dies some other time, I think you'd be really good at that.
I rated it full stars because i love warrior cats and spotted leaf and firestar. I thought the tears and the blood had a good effect and the shading was good the forest in the background was a little bit sad compared to the rest and lacked detail unlike the cats but it still it was a amazing piece and i love the way you used a sad scene and really pushed emotion into it.
I suggest doing moss kits death because it is yet another sad scene and you would do it very well.
The lack of detail in the background really makes the cats stand out. You can really catch the feeling of grief with the tears and all the blood. The scene is extremely sad, you have really managed to catch their expressions, this made my cry for a very long time...
You could maybe do Sandstorm when Firestar dies some other time, I think you'd be really good at that.
Good Luck, Your work is AMAZING!!
I thought the tears and the blood had a good effect and the shading was good the forest in the background was a little bit sad compared to the rest and lacked detail unlike the cats but it still it was a amazing piece and i love the way you used a sad scene and really pushed emotion into it.
I suggest doing moss kits death because it is yet another sad scene and you would do it very well.
Thank you and good luck
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