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That was never going to happen by PenguinEatsCarrots That was never going to happen by PenguinEatsCarrots
"You promised you'd be there to welcome me!"
"I'm sorry...that was never going to happen, my love."


:SPOILER ALERT:
so heres the scene where Spottedleaf dies for a 2nd time.. wich must really suck.. this was another depresing scene that happened in the last hope :( wich i swear was the most depressing of all her books!
please give me feedback through a critique :D it would help me alot!
i'm not puting the mature filter on because of the blood.. but if i get comments about it ill put it on

other warrior cat scenes:
art (c) :iconpenguineatscarrots:
Characters (c) Erin Hunter
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:iconbeautifulsilverhawk:
Critique by Beautifulsilverhawk Dec 30, 2012, 2:57:28 PM
I rated it full stars because i love warrior cats and spotted leaf and firestar.
I thought the tears and the blood had a good effect and the shading was good the forest in the background was a little bit sad compared to the rest and lacked detail unlike the cats but it still it was a amazing piece and i love the way you used a sad scene and really pushed emotion into it.

I suggest doing moss kits death because it is yet another sad scene and you would do it very well.


Thank you and good luck
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Critique by alpy19 Mar 16, 2013, 10:22:54 PM
I gave this full stars because I am a huge fan of Warriors. I love Spottedleaf and Firestar (though I think hes still better with Sandstorm)
The lack of detail in the background really makes the cats stand out. You can really catch the feeling of grief with the tears and all the blood. The scene is extremely sad, you have really managed to catch their expressions, this made my cry for a very long time...

You could maybe do Sandstorm when Firestar dies some other time, I think you'd be really good at that.

Good Luck, Your work is AMAZING!!
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:iconamberstormsunny:
AmberstormSunny Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Meh, I hated FirexSpotted anyway.  She's a great cat, but a horrible relationship partner. Plus, if she lived, who would Fire pick in StarClan?
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:iconjilllllly:
jilllllly Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
Most good warrior cats died in the Last Hope, I heard I cryed so sad
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:iconsmokefeather4ever:
Smokefeather4ever Featured By Owner Edited Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This was the saddest thing I've ever read in warriors! Waaaah! 
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
; - ; it was one of the saddest parts!
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:iconspeckledfinch:
speckledfinch Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Is spottedleaf supposed to be a little stary and fading.
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:iconravenoftheclans:
ravenoftheclans Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've never actually liked shipping these two... :| (Blank Stare)  But wow, I like the quality... It's amazing, everything came out perfect here, the fur, shade, color, looks exactly like how I had imagined the two in the books... A beautiful work of art... Here is a +fav 
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:iconpurryproductions-inc:
PurryProductions-Inc Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This part was soooo sad ;w;
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:iconmichaelwolfheart:
MichaelWolfHeart Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;-;
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know heres a tissue
:icontissueplz:
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:iconmichaelwolfheart:
MichaelWolfHeart Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For this, you must have your feels torn as well.
En garde!
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:iconstarthewolfpuppy:
StarTheWolfPuppy Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist

If I were Sandstorm, I'd be really pissed after this xD

Spottedleaf saved her life and sacrificed her own to make Firestar happy, then Firestar went and died anyway! Sandstorm must have been like,

"Y DIDNT U LET ME DIE!? :iconforeveraloneplz: "

 

really sad pic, and it was the one scene that redeemed Spottedleaf a little for me (I never really liked her)

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:iconcrazy-catt19:
Crazy-Catt19 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Agreed.
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:iconhawkyfrost:
HawkyFrost Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This event is so sad, and you captured it perfectly.
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
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:iconbigreddoganna:
bigreddoganna Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
I`m not sure if its ok when I laugh about what happened to spottedleafs spirit
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:iconcrazy-catt19:
Crazy-Catt19 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i hate spottedleaf
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:iconxredtnt:
xRedTnt Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013

Lol TIMELINETIME

End of Into The Wild: Spottedleaf dies

End of Last Hope: Spottedleaf diesanddssapearsforeverandnoonewilleverseeherorsmellhereveragain.

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:iconcamiwolf09:
camiwolf09 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HOLY FLUF I NEARLY CRIED WHEN I GOT TO THIS PART ;-;
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:iconartmakeslife:
ArtMakesLife Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Well not probably it DOES suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconartmakeslife:
ArtMakesLife Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I love this and it probably does suck that she dies for the 2nd time.
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ^^ and yeahh
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:iconartmakeslife:
ArtMakesLife Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yep I feel so bad for her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconxredtnt:
xRedTnt Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
I felt worse for Firestar D:
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:iconkongohb:
kongohb Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i cried at this scene ;A;
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me too ; - ;
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SwedTheDemon Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I THOUGHT THIS WAS JUST A BIT OF ART NOT A SPOILER IM SO SAD SPOTTEDLEAF DIESWHY DOES SHE HAVE TO DIE SHE WAS SO COOL! I hate spoilers... But the art is good!
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i'm sorry D :
and thanks ^^
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:icon247alpha:
247alpha Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
im srry but I don't like spottedleaf
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well goody for you
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:iconwarriorsultimatefan:
WARRIORSULTIMATEFAN Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
why does Mapleshade blame it on Sandstorm! there are a ton of other she-cats in the clans that have kits and mates! sorry to the other she-cats but why did Spottedleaf have to die! AGAIN!
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
who knows maybe cause Mapleshade was a Thunderclan she-cat at on point
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:iconwarriorsultimatefan:
WARRIORSULTIMATEFAN Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
i hated that Spottedleaf died....AGAIN....i crushed my heart and i cried ..i have read the last hope twice and still cried...any way i love you drawing i could feel the pain Fire star was going through
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you~
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:iconvintage-meow:
vintage-meow Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
rightinthefeels
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ikr ; - ;
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:iconvintage-meow:
vintage-meow Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
why would you even-
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it had to be done
so i did it
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:iconvintage-meow:
vintage-meow Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
sobs
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:iconforeststone:
Foreststone Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was trying to forget about this =.=' I decided I'm going to buy The Last Hope BUT not read it =P if that makes any sense if not let me clarify: I want to collect ALL warriors books :P
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha you do that ^^
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:iconfuzzyleaf-4eveh:
Fuzzyleaf-4eveh Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this part made me cry. so many of my fav charries died! I cried for half and hour maybe
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
same :<
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:iconmooncookie22:
mooncookie22 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist
how she can die when shes alredy dead?
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:iconpenguineatscarrots:
PenguinEatsCarrots Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very carefully
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:iconnekoparamore:
NekoParamore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
where do they go when they die a second time?? i'm so curious!!
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:iconmitzi-mutt:
Mitzi-Mutt Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
they fade away. gone forever
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:iconnekoparamore:
NekoParamore Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
but...that's no fun i feel like crying again X<
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:iconsilverstream111:
Silverstream111 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Artist
Well not exactly, it's just,there below average, but i am starting to love him
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:iconsilverstream111:
Silverstream111 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Artist
wait sorry, i LIKE silverstraem
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Silverstream111 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student Artist
My favourites are(Yellowfang Leafpool Cinderheart Lionblaze Stormfur Firestar Bluestar) I HATE (Silverstream Graystipe Feathertail Honeyfern Sorreltail Brackenfur)
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