I will always love you Half Moon... Even if I Can't
here it is! a Jayfeather and Half Moon picture! on my last-ish poll you all wanted some Jay and Moon lovin so here it is : D even if it is a bit sad :C on a side note.. i seem to request critiques a lot don't I?
My gosh this is just beautiful... I love the way you made him looks like a cat in general... I love how you made his patterns. I really liked the nice detail. I also liked Half Moon in the background. I really like the pose they're in. I also admired the way you did stupendous shading on the both if them. The fading affect on Half Moon was spectacular too. The words in the image too, the style they're printed it was really affective on the picture and looked great. Those words really did move me, Jayfeather being a medicine cat, therefore forbidden to love...Just...Amazing. Wonderful work you have here.
ok i think this is very awesome i could never do any of this XD JAYFEATHER: he is very well done ! i love how his pose looks ! HALFMOON: shes a bit to not being able to see i think she should have have been more visible but not my art so yea BACK ROUND : the back round is amazing ! I love how it goes from dark blue to a white it makes it look like they are sitting infront of the sun in leaf bare with snow XD
and i just think that i could have done nothing to make it any better than it already is .
Really good, but Half moon's chin is a bit big, and Jayfeather's shoulder is a bit big and awkward. Other than that this is an amazing drawing, I especially love how you drew Jayfeather's face, and the shading is stunning.
JAYFEATHER:
he is very well done ! i love how his pose looks !
HALFMOON:
shes a bit to not being able to see i think she should have have been more visible but not my art so yea
BACK ROUND : the back round is amazing ! I love how it goes from dark blue to a white it makes it look like they are sitting infront of the sun in leaf bare with snow XD
and i just think that i could have done nothing to make it any better than it already is .
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