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Back from the dead

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Graystripe just finished attacking a brown tom from the dark forest, when he was suddenly ripped away. He jumped away and turned around to see his attacker."heh.." The tom sneered "Guess whose back from the dead.." Graystripe's eyes widened when he saw the gray and silver tom. A large scar shown on his neck. "Darkstripe!" He hissed. "Its my turn to be the killer" Darkstripe snarled. "Your mine to kill!" At that, they both lunged at each other.

this was my entry for :iconwarriorcatsfanclub:'s Love Hate contest~
crappy background is crappy DX and Drakstripes legs are all wonky DX
I hate Darkstripe D:< he was a huge bum! I love Graystripe though~ i would have done Jayfeather but he cant really fight.. plus Graystripe is perfect for this part.. i wish this actually happened during the fight against the dark forest cats D: it would have been legit
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Darkstripe and Graystripe belong to Erin Hunter
art belongs to :iconpenguineatscarrots:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Ok, sry this may be an older piece of work, or not, I don't check ^.^
You said inThe description that you dont like the legs, but it adds some creepiness to dark stripe. His eyes should be just a tish brighter tho, cuz he's dead, and I believe that dark forest/ starclan cats's eyes glow. I would have put a little more blood on the ground because this was a huge battle, there's bound to be blood on the ground! The lighting is really dark, that goes both ways, I meant its supposed to be dark, but a little light on the cats never hurt anyone <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>
All in all this is fabulous! And I like the originality, I've never seen a pic like this drawn before<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>